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Hi!

Two things I really like about this one: her facial expression, and her colour scheme! The colours are wicked, especially the space-glitter insides and eyes. I know this is a WIP, but the flat shading in contrast with the texture space-stuff looks really cool!

The anatomy is really good (especially the hands!), but some things to note:
- the collarbones seem too low, and out of line with the shoulder bones on both sides. In fact, I think you should be able to see part of her collarbone through the hole in her neck! holidayverve.typepad.com/.a/6a… Her pelvis bone also looks a bit high, I don't think it should be in line with the belly button.
- the right arm (or her left) is much longer than the other and the perspective is a bit off in the angle that she is holding it. Reducing the angle of her inner right arm and foreshortening the upper arm a little would be my advice.
- as for the dislocated shoulder, I'm going to throw a guess that only the shoulder bone should be exaggeratedly out of place, while the rest of the arm hangs down more limply! www.oocities.org/gatorpasports…

Lastly I think it would be cool if the other parts of the picture where she has the space-glitter was line-less like her left ear, especially on her stomach where the space-glitter seems to be spilling out. Just a thought.

Vision and Originality: 2.5 and 3 respectively. Not exactly original but I know you're drawing in a particular fandom.
Technique and Impact: 3.5 and 4 respectively because your line-art is lovely and you definitely have good design sense!

Can't wait to see how this looks if you continue to work on it!